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How To Write Follow-ups (Email 2 + 3)

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Written by Said Jrad
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Step 1: Keep Your Sequence Concise

  • Limit your cold email sequence to three emails total (initial email + two follow-ups)

  • Response rates typically "fall off a cliff" after the third email

Step 2: Repurpose Your Initial Email Content

  • Don't reinvent the wheel for follow-ups

  • Reuse the core offer and value proposition from your first email

  • Think of follow-ups as pieces of the same puzzle—not new messages

Step 3: Create Your First Follow-Up (Email #2)

  1. Keep the same core offer as the initial email

  2. Consider offering a tangible asset like:

    • A strategy document

    • A selection of resumes/CVs

    • A list of ideas specific to their business

  3. Make the request simple and direct

  4. Example: "I outlined a full YouTube strategy for you with ten video topics, thumbnail ideas, and script outlines. You don't mind if I share the strategy doc with you here?"

Step 4: Create Your Second Follow-Up (Email #3)

  1. Focus on offering a video explanation of your solution

  2. Keep it extremely short and direct

  3. Make it easy to say "yes" to viewing your content

  4. Example: "I recorded a quick video going over a YouTube strategy you can use to sign five high-ticket clients in the next 90 days. Mind if I share the video here?"

Step 5: Develop A/B Test Variations

  1. For each email in your sequence, create at least one alternative version

  2. Test significantly different approaches:

    • Ultra-short (one sentence) emails

    • Bullet-point formatting

    • Different opening styles

    • Varying levels of directness

Step 6: Incorporate These Effective Variations:

For Email #2:

  • Standard Version: Offer a specific asset (strategy doc, resumes, etc.)

  • Short Version: Directly pitch a video that showcases your solution

For Email #3:

  • Video Offer: "I recorded a quick video going over [specific solution]. Mind if I share the video here?"

  • Referral Request: "Who might be the best person at [company name] to discuss [your solution] with?"

Step 7: Maintain Consistency in Your Core Offer

  • While testing different formats and approaches, keep your value proposition consistent

  • Repetition helps prospects recognize and remember your offer

  • Think of it like advertising—seeing the same message multiple times increases effectiveness

Best Practices:

  • The most effective follow-ups are extremely short and direct

  • Sometimes email #3 outperforms earlier messages by being ultra-focused

  • Don't change what you're offering—change how you present it

  • Include a simple question that's easy to say "yes" to

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